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"God! I love Hottopic but its so freaking expensive!" My friend, Jess, said as we exited the store. This was true, we both loved the store, but it was so expensive. I laughed, neither of us really paying attention to where we were walking.

"Hey, [Name], where do you want to go n-" Jess was cut off as she slammed into a person walking by, she was sent falling to the ground while the person just stood there.

"Oh my gosh, Jess are you okay?" I asked as I kneeled down beside her. "Hey, I'm sorry." I said as I looked up, my eyes meeting very dark tented sunglasses. He was pretty tall, dark auburn hair, tanned skin and a bomber jacket over a simple white T completed his look.  A smug look was plastered on the face of America's most stereotypical 'bad boy'. He glared down at us, not even looking like he was going to apologize.

"Hey, watch it!" He growled, giving us the finger before starting to walk away. Well, this pissed me off.

I got up has hurried after him. "Hey, stupid, it was an accident! She didn't mean to run into you." I told him as I caught him by the arm. He turned and in a blink of an eye it was no longer my hand around his arm but his huge and around my wrist with a tightening grip.

"Listen bitch, you little friend ran into me. That was obviously her fault, and I'm already in a pissy mood so leave me alone." He snarled.

I glared at him, and with one swift motion, reached up and stole his black sunglasses. For a split moment his eyes were widened in surprise, but then they quickly became extremely angry. He tried to snatch his glasses from my grasp, but I kept them away from him.

"Hey, listen bastard, it was a freaking accident. So calm the fuck down." I hissed, and dropped his glasses and wrenched my wrist out of his grasp. Jess was walking towards me as I was walking back to her, "Come on, I'm hungry." I muttered, and lead the way to the food court. That guy didn't come after us, or anything, but I still could help but be super pissed.

"Hey, [Name] wanna go to the mall? Its Friday!" My friend asked as we walked out of school. I shrugged, the events from last Friday still lingering on my mind through the week. Jess seemed to pick up on that, "[Name], he's not going to be there! And, plus it was really my fault, I wasn't paying attention and ended up running into him. He shouldn't have gotten so mad but I understand where he's coming from."

I rolled my eyes, "Fine." I said, smirking. "You need to take me by my house first." I said. She nodded, both of us parting to either side of the car, I opened the back door of the little Toyota and threw my stuff in the back, then hopped in the front seat as Jess hopped into the drivers seat.

I finally had enough money to get myself a certain something at Hottopic I'd been eyeing for a while. I picked out a cute shirt and walked quickly towards the cash register, trying not to look at other stuff that may tempt me along the way. I set my shirt on the counter and started to dig around in my purse for my wallet. "Will this be all?" the cashier asked, I shook my head as I looked up, holding the money. I was meet with beautiful, dark crimson eyes and dark auburn hair. I stared incredulously as a smirk grew on that guy's face. He rang up my shirt and took the money and gave me exact change back.

I soon as he was finished I turned, trying to get as far away from his as possible, when he caught my arm. I turned to face him only to be me with rough lips pressed against mine. I was shocked, and froze in position as he kissed me, then slowly with drew. "Hey, doll face, nice seeing you again." I stared at him, who was leaning over the counter, a smirk playing on his lips. "Oh, and my name's Al." He said with a wink.

I turned away from him and rushed out of the store. Jess just stared and looked back at Al, whom she recognized immediately and then dropped the things she was going to get to run after me.

"[Name]! What'd he say??" She asked as she approached me, I was sitting down on a bench, glaring at the world, with a flushed face.

"He didn't say anything much." I muttered.

"So why'd you rush out of the store so quickly?"

"Cuz… he kissed me."

Jess just looked at me, an incredulous look on her face. "No way, really?" I just nodded, she sighed. "Well… I guess you have a boyfriend now." She said as she sat down beside me.

I spun around to glare at her once she'd said this. "Ha, now way! I hate him!" I hissed.

Jess laughed, "Well, he's a dick, that's for sure."

"I am, aren't I?" A deep voice came from behind us." Both Jess and I jumped off the bench and spun around, facing the sunglass-clad Al, a smirk plastered on his smug face. "I was kinda hoping I could talk to you." He said to me.

"Ha, like I'd want to talk to you! You stupid pervert." I retorted.

"Aw, now that hurt." He said in a dramatic voice, putting a hand over his heart.

"Whatever, come on Jess, lets go." I said, grabbing her wrist. I start to drag her away, went Al runs up in front of us.

I tried to pass him but he just got in my way till I stopped. "So, can I have your name?" He asked.

"[Name]." I replied in a flat voice.

"Aw, cute." Al said, pulling me towards him. I let go of Jess and tried to push him away as he pulled me in for a rough embrace. "Look, I like you. You'll go out with me right?"

I stared at him for a moment, blinked, and curtly replied: "No."
I don't know if I'll make another... Probably not. Yeahh I just wanted to write something with Al, because he's just so sexy you know? XDD And Yes, I'm going to start work back on Love Me ^^

If I have any stupid little mistakes (or big ones) please tell me ^^'
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SageofAges729 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
XD I love the character's reaction at the end. The flat "No." is exactly what I'd do. 
SakuraTaisen12 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Me gusta...there's nothing else I can say XD
ladyparis2u Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this, but no as much as I love 2p!America.
HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha Yeah, he's pretty hard not to love.
Mikavocaloid Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
>w< Please write more! I am so interested in seeing how this progresses =3
AizenSama13 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
i found a big mistake, it ended
HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry XD
animeandrocknroll Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
XD Nice! I saw a couple grammar mistakes. But other than that, it was awesome!
HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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