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"God! I love Hottopic but its so freaking expensive!" My friend, Jess, said as we exited the store. This was true, we both loved the store, but it was so expensive. I laughed, neither of us really paying attention to where we were walking.

"Hey, [Name], where do you want to go n-" Jess was cut off as she slammed into a person walking by, she was sent falling to the ground while the person just stood there.

"Oh my gosh, Jess are you okay?" I asked as I kneeled down beside her. "Hey, I'm sorry." I said as I looked up, my eyes meeting very dark tented sunglasses. He was pretty tall, dark auburn hair, tanned skin and a bomber jacket over a simple white T completed his look.  A smug look was plastered on the face of America's most stereotypical 'bad boy'. He glared down at us, not even looking like he was going to apologize.

"Hey, watch it!" He growled, giving us the finger before starting to walk away. Well, this pissed me off.

I got up has hurried after him. "Hey, stupid, it was an accident! She didn't mean to run into you." I told him as I caught him by the arm. He turned and in a blink of an eye it was no longer my hand around his arm but his huge and around my wrist with a tightening grip.

"Listen bitch, you little friend ran into me. That was obviously her fault, and I'm already in a pissy mood so leave me alone." He snarled.

I glared at him, and with one swift motion, reached up and stole his black sunglasses. For a split moment his eyes were widened in surprise, but then they quickly became extremely angry. He tried to snatch his glasses from my grasp, but I kept them away from him.

"Hey, listen bastard, it was a freaking accident. So calm the fuck down." I hissed, and dropped his glasses and wrenched my wrist out of his grasp. Jess was walking towards me as I was walking back to her, "Come on, I'm hungry." I muttered, and lead the way to the food court. That guy didn't come after us, or anything, but I still could help but be super pissed.



"Hey, [Name] wanna go to the mall? Its Friday!" My friend asked as we walked out of school. I shrugged, the events from last Friday still lingering on my mind through the week. Jess seemed to pick up on that, "[Name], he's not going to be there! And, plus it was really my fault, I wasn't paying attention and ended up running into him. He shouldn't have gotten so mad but I understand where he's coming from."

I rolled my eyes, "Fine." I said, smirking. "You need to take me by my house first." I said. She nodded, both of us parting to either side of the car, I opened the back door of the little Toyota and threw my stuff in the back, then hopped in the front seat as Jess hopped into the drivers seat.



I finally had enough money to get myself a certain something at Hottopic I'd been eyeing for a while. I picked out a cute shirt and walked quickly towards the cash register, trying not to look at other stuff that may tempt me along the way. I set my shirt on the counter and started to dig around in my purse for my wallet. "Will this be all?" the cashier asked, I shook my head as I looked up, holding the money. I was meet with beautiful, dark crimson eyes and dark auburn hair. I stared incredulously as a smirk grew on that guy's face. He rang up my shirt and took the money and gave me exact change back.

I soon as he was finished I turned, trying to get as far away from his as possible, when he caught my arm. I turned to face him only to be me with rough lips pressed against mine. I was shocked, and froze in position as he kissed me, then slowly with drew. "Hey, doll face, nice seeing you again." I stared at him, who was leaning over the counter, a smirk playing on his lips. "Oh, and my name's Al." He said with a wink.

I turned away from him and rushed out of the store. Jess just stared and looked back at Al, whom she recognized immediately and then dropped the things she was going to get to run after me.

"[Name]! What'd he say??" She asked as she approached me, I was sitting down on a bench, glaring at the world, with a flushed face.

"He didn't say anything much." I muttered.

"So why'd you rush out of the store so quickly?"

"Cuz… he kissed me."

Jess just looked at me, an incredulous look on her face. "No way, really?" I just nodded, she sighed. "Well… I guess you have a boyfriend now." She said as she sat down beside me.

I spun around to glare at her once she'd said this. "Ha, now way! I hate him!" I hissed.

Jess laughed, "Well, he's a dick, that's for sure."

"I am, aren't I?" A deep voice came from behind us." Both Jess and I jumped off the bench and spun around, facing the sunglass-clad Al, a smirk plastered on his smug face. "I was kinda hoping I could talk to you." He said to me.

"Ha, like I'd want to talk to you! You stupid pervert." I retorted.

"Aw, now that hurt." He said in a dramatic voice, putting a hand over his heart.

"Whatever, come on Jess, lets go." I said, grabbing her wrist. I start to drag her away, went Al runs up in front of us.

I tried to pass him but he just got in my way till I stopped. "So, can I have your name?" He asked.

"[Name]." I replied in a flat voice.

"Aw, cute." Al said, pulling me towards him. I let go of Jess and tried to push him away as he pulled me in for a rough embrace. "Look, I like you. You'll go out with me right?"

I stared at him for a moment, blinked, and curtly replied: "No."
I don't know if I'll make another... Probably not. Yeahh I just wanted to write something with Al, because he's just so sexy you know? XDD And Yes, I'm going to start work back on Love Me ^^

If I have any stupid little mistakes (or big ones) please tell me ^^'
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SageofAges729 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
XD I love the character's reaction at the end. The flat "No." is exactly what I'd do. 
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SakuraTaisen12 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Me gusta...there's nothing else I can say XD
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ladyparis2u Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this, but no as much as I love 2p!America.
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha Yeah, he's pretty hard not to love.
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Mikavocaloid Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
>w< Please write more! I am so interested in seeing how this progresses =3
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AizenSama13 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
i found a big mistake, it ended
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm sorry XD
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animeandrocknroll Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
XD Nice! I saw a couple grammar mistakes. But other than that, it was awesome!
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Tak!
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student General Artist
?????
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MisterMasterMeister Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
What part of I Love You do you not understand
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helloworldies Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL I wanna read more XD I would have said FUCK YEAS! to him XD
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NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012   Artist
I'd go out with him LOL XD Please write more this was awesome!!! <3
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Tigertails1997 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Artist
more please
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Mew-Ayame Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I stared at him for a moment, blinked, and curtly replied: "No."

:iconthisplz::iconsuperepicwinplz:

You're the best 2p!America writer, seriously. You write him so...PERFECTLY! :iconcannotevenplz:
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I don't really understand what makes the way I write him any different than others but thanks ^^
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Mew-Ayame Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem. :iconyay2pamericaplz::iconawesomeawesomeplz:
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MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So....Awesome

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oredia Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
LET ME SHOWER YOU IN LOVE (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ <3 <3 <3
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Why thank you XDD
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oredia Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student General Artist
you are very much welcomed
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Hetalian-Otaku Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
:iconspainapprovedplz: Awesome! And Hot Topic IS really expensive... It angers me, but still, sometimes it's worth it! :D
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Totally!
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
first sentince... i dont think anything truer has been said before.... -_-


AHHH i dont like clifhangers dont do this to me!!! another chapt please i'll go insane if u dont!!!!!
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Ikr? Hottopic is freaking awesome but its so freaking over priced.

Ehhh I'm still debating if I should write another chapter.
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
uhg! yes it cost me $20 just to get a white neko bag an the hottopic neer my house is a retail hottopic [they get all the stuff that other ones dont have room for] so it should be a lower price, an there fucking pins cost &1 an there only the size of a qurter DX

PLEASE!!!!!! :iconchibiprussiaplz:
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha I know! And the Hottopic near me, they're so small that they are really expansive, and don't keep stuff in stock for a long time
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ah the horror! but its even worse im always like flat broke so i dont even bother trying to go to the mall cause it makes me sad TT~TT an hottopic sells all the awesome anime shirts to [they sell like 1 of each so if it dont fit ur fucked, i got a fma shirt that "just" fits if my boobs were evn a lil bigger i couldnt ware it] i have to find this one store i went to once it was called f.l.y or something like that it sold all kinds of games, movies, shirts, an there was plushies~! but i cant rember were i was when i found the place [i got 2 bleach T's an a key chan with death note stuff on it]
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SlifofinaDragon Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
please more
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PokeBW4Evr Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Dang, you wrote this well! I really liked it!^_^ I would love it if you wrote another chapter, but if you don't, that's okay too - the author's decision! :meow:
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Memichow Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student Writer
Aww Reader-chan you should not say no to Al,cause to him thats not an answer!....now he will force you and make you his MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA,not that im not his though >:3
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I totally agree, Al would be pissed.
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Memichow Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
lol
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Kiku1319 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student General Artist
NUUUU YOU MUST CONTINUE~!
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tadpole221 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconmoarplzplz:I beg of you, more of the amazing jerky/bitchyness that is 2p!Al! You write him so well!~ :iconbegplz:
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
*rolls eyes* You know how hard it is for me to write a character like that?? XDDD I have a hard enough time writing demon America and demon England XDD
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tadpole221 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh but all your hard work pays off, you do him extremely well! He's so perfect!

:icon2pamericaplz:

Ah, but even so, I cannot force you to write more... :icongoodjobplz:
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha I personally think I made him to much of a push over ^^' But thank you ^^
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SarahSunshinez Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconneedmoarplz: Plz one more!!! :iconpweaseplz:
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ZoeTheICONiac Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMFG!MOAR PWEASE!:iconmoarplz::iconpweaseplz:
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Chokokyoko Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
There were a couple of errors like: "I got up has hurried after him..." "He turned and in a blink of an eye it was no longer my hand around his arm but his huge ((h))and around my wrist with a tightening grip." "I soon as he was finished I turned..." "I turned to face him only to be me((t)) with rough lips..."
(there were a few others, but those were the main ones. Sorry if I'm pointing out a lot)

L-l-l-love me's coming back?!?! :iconpraisethesunplz:
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Tis okay, I'm pretty sloppy when it comes to proof reading (okay I don't at all okay?)

Yeahh I'm going to be starting back on it tommorrow an maybe have seven up by Friday.
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Chokokyoko Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha I guess we're polar opposites when it comes to proof-reading then... XD

Hooray! :iconwoohooplz: I can't wait!
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha can't you tell? By all my mistakes in Love Me and Entertain Me?? I'm horrid when it comes to having to proof read. I hate it.
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Chokokyoko Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? I would totally proofread for you, I kinda just do it mentally anyway XD
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha then I'll message you when my next chapter's done ;DDD
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Chokokyoko Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay! :dance: I look forward to it!
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greenmusiclovingfrug Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
LOL serves you right Al! xD
You did a wonderful job~ <3
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HetaFiftyStates Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha What????

Well Thank you ^^
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